It's not WUMing 8bit, I just tweeted that, but I'm not sure if it makes sense. I mean is it grammatically correct?
Something is just not right.
I just want to get David Dein back at the club instead of Galzadis. He wouldn't be allowing our top players to leave season after season. Also him and Wenger had such a bromance.
Kamran it may be grammatically correct but it's not a very fluent passage. You should have replaced 'they' with 'these people'.
The closing bit doesn't make sense. I think you should re-phrase it to: ' The people who say this are hyprocrites.'
The 'run' doesn't sound right. Should it be 'ran' instead?
My god I'm being pedantic.
No, 'run' is appropriate.
No, Kamran, it shouldn't be 'ran', as 'ran' is only used as the past tense of 'run', as in: "He ran the London Marathon last year."
Ok, it's fine then .
My written English is usually alright, not sure why I got so paranoid there
On another note, Marathon >
It does make sense but it jars slightly.
Kamran, the fact that you take such care over your tweets demonstrates that you are a force for good in the modern world.
Kamran you should be a movie critic, since you've seen pretty much every movie ever made.
I watch roughly one movie every ten years.
Only Lahm would make the Spanish first 11, imo. The guy mentioning Muller can't be serious. Spain could form 3 starting 11s and he wouldn't start in any.
Movie critics are the biggest saddos on the planet.
Lahm, Ozil, Schweinsteiger, Podolski would make the Spanish starting team imo
that job would suit Kamran then
just messing
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posted on 6/6/12
It's not WUMing 8bit, I just tweeted that, but I'm not sure if it makes sense. I mean is it grammatically correct?
Something is just not right.
posted on 6/6/12
I just want to get David Dein back at the club instead of Galzadis. He wouldn't be allowing our top players to leave season after season. Also him and Wenger had such a bromance.
posted on 6/6/12
it looks right me
posted on 6/6/12
posted on 6/6/12
Kamran it may be grammatically correct but it's not a very fluent passage. You should have replaced 'they' with 'these people'.
posted on 6/6/12
The closing bit doesn't make sense. I think you should re-phrase it to: ' The people who say this are hyprocrites.'
posted on 6/6/12
The 'run' doesn't sound right. Should it be 'ran' instead?
My god I'm being pedantic.
posted on 6/6/12
No, 'run' is appropriate.
posted on 6/6/12
No, Kamran, it shouldn't be 'ran', as 'ran' is only used as the past tense of 'run', as in: "He ran the London Marathon last year."
posted on 6/6/12
Ok, it's fine then .
My written English is usually alright, not sure why I got so paranoid there
posted on 6/6/12
On another note, Marathon >
posted on 6/6/12
'they' does make sense.
posted on 6/6/12
It does make sense but it jars slightly.
posted on 6/6/12
I'm great.
posted on 6/6/12
Kamran, the fact that you take such care over your tweets demonstrates that you are a force for good in the modern world.
posted on 6/6/12
posted on 6/6/12
posted on 6/6/12
Kamran you should be a movie critic, since you've seen pretty much every movie ever made.
posted on 6/6/12
True.
posted on 6/6/12
I watch roughly one movie every ten years.
posted on 6/6/12
Only Lahm would make the Spanish first 11, imo. The guy mentioning Muller can't be serious. Spain could form 3 starting 11s and he wouldn't start in any.
posted on 6/6/12
Well said mrthierry.
posted on 6/6/12
Movie critics are the biggest saddos on the planet.
posted on 6/6/12
Lahm, Ozil, Schweinsteiger, Podolski would make the Spanish starting team imo
posted on 6/6/12
that job would suit Kamran then
just messing
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